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Unadorned, Utopia, Utterly, Uplifting Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 03/23/2024
utterly captivating was our magical night. as dawn lay down to sleep, we remained awake to stargaze. utterly romantic, honey-sweet moments we did share. a rendezvous tailor-made for royals; t'was unforgettable. utterly unforgettable! we held midnight in the palm of our hands; lost in a world of our own. utterly amorous was the spark of love exploding beneath the pale moonlight each time our lips met. utterly carefree were our passionate hearts, floating about with abandon like butterflies in Spring meadow. utterly scintillating; pocketful of stars in our sky; we watched them supine, smiling in unison with the crescent moon. utterly amazing! watchful birds were tweeting our favorite song as we danced, and danced. utterly free were our spirits; as if for the last time we held each other, never letting go.

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Date: 5/21/2024 12:25:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Well done.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/21/2024 7:19:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jeanette:-)
Date: 5/10/2024 7:27:00 PM
Makes me wish you posted your utterly magical night on Youtube. You capture the sublime and timeless moment in your stanzas. Well done.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/19/2024 8:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Triny:-)
Date: 4/7/2024 3:23:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/19/2024 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for the congratulations and my placement, Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 3/26/2024 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An "Utterly" magical write. Love It.... A FAV for me. Enjoy your day/win..............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/26/2024 8:27:00 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and fave, Paula:-)
Date: 3/26/2024 9:12:00 AM
Stunning write Edward, your repetition at the beginning of each stanza lends to the close tenderness experienced by the night viewers. Very romantic! Congratulations! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/26/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit and comments, Linda:-) Blessings, my friend.
Date: 3/26/2024 6:06:00 AM
“ we held midnight in the palm of our hands” wow what a beautiful and touching line. A dreamy and heartfelt poem that is so well articulated, and so well delivered. So many lines stood out for me in this dear EI! But i especially loved “ birds were tweeting our favorite song” awwn! How soulfully moving is this and can feel the sincerity of emotions expressed. Congratulations on your win . A fave it is for me
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/26/2024 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback, visit, and fave, Inky:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 3/23/2024 10:46:00 AM
' floating like butterflies in Spring meadow. ' Such a magical moment, indeed. Being light and carefree. This is beautiful, dreamy and romantic, all at the same time. My best to you, Edward. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 11:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brandy:-)
Date: 3/23/2024 7:27:00 AM
Captivating, magical, honey-sweet, carefree, amazing--utterly beautiful descriptions, Edward. Much enjoyed the metaphors and a sweet dialogue of doting hearts--embracing love! A FAVE!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-) I appreciate the fave, my friend.
Date: 3/23/2024 6:03:00 AM
This is utterly... Beautiful. Sweetly romantic. I especially like the line: We held midnight in the palm of our hands
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 8:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom:-)

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