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Urban Slab

some level of falling from grace happens in slab city its twisted humanity when kindness stops being nornal when green crusaders are dismissed, unseen like burying waste in landfill city of slab-stick where we live normal lives within shuttered malls affluence superimposed on poverty can anything mellow us with nature clotted under sprawl? breeding, feeding, receding within plated walls unable to bend the city to one's own wishing to carry on with things just as they are slabs pinned to the ceiling of mind sometimes shutters open to sun-dappled streaks on slab walkways what are we to make of the dandelion in the crack? a dark energy blooming between comfort and chaos maybe we can piggyback on the hope of others when small acts radiate like children who empty their piggy-banks to charity or laugh in summers of safe places towers girdle the city midst what we crave for but can't always name in our stash of consumer baubles urges like a swollen river our weak stock options that never find a ladder in the meantime we tread on - hungrily

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Date: 4/20/2025 5:09:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/20/2025 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Beata. Best wishes for a grand spring.
Date: 4/12/2025 9:42:00 PM
always a pleasure to read your work -
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/13/2025 8:10:00 AM
Thanks very much Mat. I enjoy your postings as well. Cheers. Brian
Date: 3/18/2025 1:28:00 AM
Whenever I think of the word concrete I think of architectural brutalism, the UK's choice for the reconstruction of buildings post war, a certain coldness by association and attach it to describing a world and its people right now who appear lost, powerless and without a voice or soul. Elements of my own thinking appear as I read this wonderful write Bryan. I love how you add flickers of light and hope for the future through the kindness of children. A winner in my books contest or not. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/18/2025 7:06:00 AM
Hi Gary. Thanks very much for your appraisal of my poem. We have a number of Brutalist buildings here in Toronto, rising with the past demolition of Victorian homes. Slab concrete came to the forefront. I hope that you had a chance to see the film "The Brutalist." My poem missed the mark on the real Slab City in California so contest expectations are low. Thank you for your thoughtful remarks. Always a blessing to read. Be well. Brian
Date: 3/13/2025 7:48:00 PM
profound, unique write dear poet.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/13/2025 8:15:00 PM
My appreciation for your comment on my posting. Perhaps some contest recognition but I am doubtful. Accolades to the actual Slab City are probably the desired script. Thank you for your stop by.
Date: 3/13/2025 3:14:00 PM
To me, this portrayed the darker and sad part of humanity. I'm sure that was your intention SO you succeeded. I don't know anything about contest judges and I will also admit, I don't know what urban slab stands for exactly - not YET, I'll look it up, anyway, I'm trying to say I think you did a mighty fine word portrait ... CayCay
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/13/2025 4:01:00 PM
Very thoughtful words in your message, CayCay. Thank you. My slab city is built on brutal slabs of concrete, and isn't the Slab City, California. Hence, my small piece will be lucky to place as it (most likely) does not meet the expectation of the contest-poet who set the parameters. My hope, too, was to offer some light on a seemingly soulless city in two of the stanzas. With appreciation for your stop by + note. Be well.
Date: 3/13/2025 12:13:00 PM
Awesome take on this unique contest theme Brian. Laura Leiser actually visited. Her take is worth a read
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/13/2025 12:17:00 PM
Thanks very much for your note of encouragement. I will check out your recommendation. Be well. Cheers.

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