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Up Soup Creek Without a Paddle

[Every good story needs a sub plot, so…] He watched from his vantage point on the bank’s roof And looked out for folk that he knew were uncouth His years on the run had made him aloof But soon he would get ‘them’ to utter the truth The dust kicking up on the path through the hills Was quite likely ‘kicked’ by the cause of his ills A man who he knew by his face, not his name A man who had brought him unwarranted shame For some time he’d lurked in the shadows by day Of this town’s affairs he could have little say He’d come to know faces and possibly yours But nothing of happenings behind closed doors He turned, cocked his gun and said, “Stop; who goes there?” A voice in the gloom said, “I am the Mayor. Of your presence here we have been well aware But of these townsfolk you have harmed not one hair With all sorts of politics happening here I’ve no time for vagrants, am I being clear So why is it that you are loitering here And hiding away, what is it you fear?” The outlaw said, “I am a man badly wronged. The condiment for which this town truly longed Was filtered away on a long ago night You call it ‘The night of the missing marmite.’ “I now seek the man who besmirched my good name He stole your yeast extract but I got the blame I’ve watched your town, searching for that face of his But I just can’t work out who everyone is The Mayor said, “You’ve made quite a stringent denial, Why not come forward and face formal trial, And if they decide you took that salty spread, You won’t need to hide cos you’ll be good and dead.” The outlaw was stunned and he lifted his head, “Say one more time what you only just said, Only one man ever said ‘Good and dead’, And I came to leave that man dead in his bed “So stand in the light and show me your face I know it was you who left me in disgrace I hoped you had vanished without any trace How did you get to be mayor of this place?” The mayor pulled a gun. “Gonna have me some fun, And you’re gonna pay for what they think you done! The marmite you speak of, I left the town none It’s all in my cellar… there’s almost a ton.” The outlaw said, “You could pull your trigger, but I’ve got a forty-five stuck in your gut That girlie Derringer might indent my skin But I’ll blow your testicles out through your grin.” The mayor dropped his gun and he said with a frown. “Why did you have to come back to this town I thought you were finished when you were sent down What will it take to stop you hanging round?” “The marmite you stole,” the outlaw began, “Was bought by the town for each woman and man And I’m here to do everything that I can To get it all back. My gun is my plan.” *** And so with the dawn of a Wild-West day The towns people found themselves full of dismay The return of the goo that had been took away Meant that would be breakfast now, day after day The mayor told the people who they need to seek They found him and gagged him before he could speak They told him, “We can’t eat that garbage, you freak.” Then bound him and threw that man into the creek

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Date: 9/12/2022 5:08:00 AM
Oh what a delight to find a witty irreverent and down to earth talent here. Marmite butties for ever, a true gift from heaven Cheers mate. ‘Tother Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/12/2022 5:25:00 AM
Why thank you, Terry (what a great name that is), with comments like that, you may call again. Cheers in return, ‘Tother ‘Tother Terry.
Date: 9/9/2022 9:46:00 AM
More, more, more...please. This is absolutely delightful. Jenna, please do not sell the saloon. I mean, I enjoy playing here knowing that I'm safe, in good hands, and lots of lovely ladies to look at. I want to hear some evidence before any aspersions are cast on the good leaders of Soup Creek!
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/9/2022 12:04:00 PM
Do you reckon I managed to conceal the fact that I wasn’t sure who was who in the Soup Creek, Milt. I don’t reckon they spotted that. Do me a favour and keep that under your hat (with those three aces).
Date: 9/8/2022 2:11:00 PM
Big apologies to the owner of the saloon Miss Jenna, I was curious ,but in no way was I pointing the finger as to how she purchased the saloon. Jenna is an honest, trustworthy member of the Soup Creek community. The Pinkertons have new evidence and an announcement will be made soon. Mayor Tom
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/11/2022 7:35:00 AM
Lol! The plot is getting thicker for sure...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/8/2022 6:29:00 PM
Apology accepted Mayor Tom. And it's a right nice one you made, too. Just take care next time 'fore you go pointing a finger at me. I have some legit business to take care of and then I'll talk about how I paid for the saloon, not that it's anyone's business, but I've nothin' to hide. ;)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2022 2:51:00 PM
The plot is getting thicker than marmite lol.
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 2:38:00 PM
I hear a very bedraggled outlaw just dragged himself out of the creek downstream at Kuppasoup Bridge. Word is he borrowed a horse and was last seen heading upstream.
Date: 9/8/2022 12:02:00 PM
SOUP CREEK SALOON FOR SALE By owner. Reasons given upon request.
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/9/2022 11:55:00 AM
I love the word ‘tarnation’. Never used it. Must rectify that. A mayor’s gong is (I think) a massive dangly medal thing.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/8/2022 6:27:00 PM
hmmm... sounds like I might be sticking around a while, Terry. There's got to be a few changes made in the Creek, though. What in tarnation is a 'mayor's gong?'
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2022 2:50:00 PM
Must have been a clone as I was out of the county. Glad you said allegedly, if I've found to be dishonest in any way I'll hand over my mayor's gong.
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 2:32:00 PM
I know of an allegedly shady Mayor who might be interested in laundering some of his I’ll gotten gains, Jenna. But don’t be in too much of a hurry; all that salty marmite is gonna make the fellas real thirsty!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2022 2:11:00 PM
You can remove the for sale sign now Jenna, wink wink.
Date: 9/8/2022 9:44:00 AM
Hilarious. This whole Soup Creek saga needs to be gathered into one spot. The stories are phenomenal and so well-written. I wish I were gifted enough to add to the story, but I'll just keep playing my cards right and stay out of trouble! Another sarsaparilla, please?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/9/2022 9:42:00 AM
Oh, you haven't, Terry. You've added nicely to the whole story. Give us more!
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 11:32:00 AM
Thanks, Milt. I didn’t want to write anything to conflict with what had been or would be written about Soup Creek. So this seemed to fit the bill.
Date: 9/7/2022 10:29:00 PM
It could not have been our trusted Mayor for he is still in Spain. When the mayor gets back everything will be found out. Sherriff Koplin and Deputy Tor will start our investigation into this matter and hopefully share the results of our findings. Who ever is responsible will face a severe penalty. Looking for the Mayors return to put an end to these untruthful rumors. Hurry back Mayor and Terry thank you for making light on all that is taking place at Soup Creek. Fine job you have done...
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/11/2022 7:33:00 AM
Jenna relax dear we are conducting an investigation and you are not a suspect the mayor is not either. We can't devulge much more than that until the investigation is completed. Ust wanted to reassure you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/8/2022 11:49:00 AM
What? Mayor Tom!! I defended you wholeheartedly and you’re going to accuse me of taking that gunk that i find so disgusting that I won’t even taste? Why would I do such a thing and stash it in your basement? I was the one who nominated you for mayor. Maybe it’s time I sell my saloon and leave Soup Creek. I bought that place with hard earned money.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2022 12:59:00 AM
Lol, hee haw
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:36:00 AM
Er… ‘fake fluffy donkey’??? You need to remember the eighties!
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:35:00 AM
Hey, Michael, haven’t been in Soup as much as I’d like of late, so some of the saga (and it’s origins) has escaped me. Hence I kept this as a sub-plot just involving Myself and Tom… sorry the poet formerly known as Tom… sorry someone purporting to be Tom… sorry… a bloke in a pink sombrero and carrying a fake fluffy donkey. Phew!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2022 12:24:00 AM
Lol Terry, I didn't think folks knew about my secret stache. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:05:00 AM
The thing is, Tom. It was actually two tons that went missing. No one built a city on rock and roll but maybe the saloon was built on Marmite. There is a rumour to that effect… but when it comes to Marmite, I won’t spread it.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/7/2022 11:18:00 PM
Hi Deputy Tor. Caught the overland land stage and I'm now back in town, people seem very nervous, I'm just a little bit curious as to how Jenna managed to buy the saloon outright, not accusing her or anything. I know the Aussie girl hates the stuff, so many questions, the plot thickens lol
Date: 9/7/2022 9:13:00 PM
Well for the record it wasn't me, my passport proves I was outta town when the precious black gold was stolen. Investigations are ongoing and an announcement will be made soon, J. C. C Westbrook of the Pinkertons assures me they are close, real close to solving this dastardly crime against the good folk of Soup Creek lol. Brilliant Terry. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:26:00 AM
As you’ve got the ear of the sheriff, Tom, I say in my defence, I didn’t actually use the word ‘Tom’ in my testimony. I made some enquiries, regarding your whereabouts, of a lad outside the saloon. He said, ‘I don’t know, my Pa don’t know… but Ma might.’ (Stolen from my first ever Marmite poem, which I don’t think I ever posted). Welcome home Mr Mayor. Terry
Date: 9/7/2022 8:17:00 PM
I can't miss out on this fuss and affray Being right in the midst of an on going parley. The story's been out that Marmite's a waste Vegemite's the hero of Australian taste! (And Gersh remembers Zappa! )
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:20:00 AM
From what I’m hearing… Gershon remembers NOAH!! Here is the definitive truth: Marmite - rather salty. Vegemite - less salty. Own brand - cheaper. The Mayor’s got all the gold so I settle for cheaper. Thanks, Elizabeth. Terry
Date: 9/7/2022 7:30:00 PM
Call me Ishmael... and I don't know... What happened to Frank Zappa's 'Hungry Freaks, Daddy?' (His first album, c. 1964)... By the way, is that you raining down monsoons on Pakistan, Mr. Flood?! lol. Keep smiling, Gershon
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:16:00 AM
And there came upon the land a mighty flood!.. Not guilty your honour. I was out west.
Date: 9/7/2022 6:41:00 PM
Call me crude but the testicles out through the grin did me in.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/8/2022 6:46:00 PM
I would say due to your anatomical usage and not less appropriate terms you were allowed to explain what you meant.
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:13:00 AM
Thanks Vickey. I was astounded that Soup allowed my testicles (if you catch my drift). Glad to give you a ‘laugh’. Terry
Date: 9/7/2022 5:18:00 PM
Oh, say it ain't so! I've never tasted Marmite, and it's caused so much trouble that I don't want to. I'll stick with bacon for breakfast. I'll never believe Mayor Tom is guilty of such a dastardly deed, for he's sworn an oath that this town he will lead. The mystery is: Who set him up? Or, who was disguised as the Mayor and wants to get rid of him?
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/8/2022 12:11:00 AM
Could this have been the first ‘hack’, was this in fact identity theft. Well what did the mayor expect when his password was ‘ME4MAYOR’. Glad you enjoyed, Jenna. Terry
Date: 9/7/2022 4:39:00 PM
Written with care not to infringe on the existing saga. They say of Marmite, you either love or you hate it. Thus, the mayor is a hero or a villain depending on your point of view (sorry Tom!) ;-)
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