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Untitled Gray with Spoon - Jasper Johns

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This was written about engaging with art and also human connection.

the curve of common beauty how it catches the eye creates a reflection captures yet sets you free convinces it's all within grasp set apart from everything causes me to stand and stare almost at myself I evaporate as I'm contained - inexplicably the next person remains unaware for me you add highlights to the mundane focus and demand my attention my chin up and eyes wide you grab me and take hold you like a caught echo whilst I fill a page yet can't remember mystified in the knowing clouded in the walking away when I look again the details are smudged all hidden behind sadness elevate ordinary take me with it draw me in once more confuse me into accepting there's more beyond the grey

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Date: 1/16/2025 5:37:00 AM
Theres more beyond the grey yes, and to be able to see the grey or from that state of color too is a blessing for some, as some only arw stuck in either black or white! This is so very deep and profound and who would have thought of all that youv shared and delivered here for the artwork? You really have a deep understanding of art and see and feel beyond the grey or any brushstrokes . Pleasure reading this gem! Absolutely loved it! Sending you light always
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Date: 1/16/2025 11:48:00 AM
I just love how art work can start off the ideas. I find acrostics good for the same reason, they just act like a big source of inspiration and my brain happily seizes it (if I'm lucky!) thanks for popping by for this perculiar choice haha

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