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Why must a man break a woman's heart?
If ever I wondered or questioned anything about love, it would be this part.
I'm unsure of how to approach this, not really sure where to start.
All I wanna know is why he had to break my heart....????
He told me it was the inevitable and that he had to do so,
In order for my love to show.
I don't get it...I don't get this part....
Does a man break a woman's heart, in order for him to know how love her?
Or does he break her heart so that she will know how she should be loved?
I think I get it....maybe I've got this part...
If a heart has never been broken, then truth has never been spoken,
After the lie has been tagged, labeled, and categorized as such a lie.
Wait a minute....I think I'm lost...i still don't get it!
So you mean that my pain & tears is what measures, what I thought I've been giving &
showing you for years?
He said he needed to be sure that what I was showing & giving was real.
So does my love feel real after you see & feel the tears running down the roof of my exterior?
He already knew that my scars ran deep & wide as the Mississippi, he was aware that my
interior was under construction from previous devastation
Wow....and after all that...this is how he still did me.
If I attempt to analyze this with my "worldly" mind...it may never make sense.
When I step into the spiritual realm, I hear the spirit say this,
"I close one door to open another with better opportunity"....
If you're standing in the midst of the world, you may never get this part.
Lord bless the woman in the "world" standing with a broken heart.
I can't explain why he broke my heart, I guess I'll never get that part.

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Date: 11/24/2010 7:43:00 AM
@Dr. Ram, I find it interesting the things that one can experience in life; that don't an "actual" meaning in the world. But as I said in my poem, if I attempt to analyze this with my worldly mind, it may never make sense. But truly, I heard the spirit say this, "I close one door in order to open another with better opportunity." But us as people, have to understand that there is a greater meaning to all that we endure & we MUST count it all JOY! : *)
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Date: 11/23/2010 4:43:00 PM
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Date: 11/23/2010 2:46:00 PM
Very interesting question you have raised , that often takes place in life of women, Enjoli
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