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Uninhibited

My heart is open and my lips are sealed My voice is silenced but the words need not be spoken You know my every thought You know my soul You reach for me Gentle are your strong hands that pull me in closer I feel your breath warm upon my neck My heart melts into yours as your arms embrace me Soft are your fingertips as they gently caress my cheek Sweet is the taste of your tender kiss I am yours completely and yours I will remain Nothing held back All is surrendered Given to you in trust I am yours and yet I am free Free to love unconditionally I am captive Captive to the magic that surrounds us But I am not bound All of me given to all of you I am uninhibited Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/6/2009 7:43:00 AM

The purest love is the greatest surrender, only those who know it can describe its beauty so well. Shalom

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 4/3/2009 9:51:00 AM

Terrific love poem Lolita... beautifully expressed.... thank you so much for your comment

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/2/2009 8:51:00 AM

So many things to which this strength of love could refer, be it your passion for your partner, the sun and nature on your neck, or your profound faith? Cleverly worded it suits many and so means something different to each of your readers... Nice one! Anna-Marie.

Brian Strand

Date: 4/2/2009 12:25:00 AM

Your title reveals all Lolita.Look forward to more of your creative 'outpourings'.Have a good day.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2009 5:44:00 PM

A joyous write that is an outstanding tribute to true love, Lolita! Indeed, the magic an capture us when we fall in love.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/1/2009 3:25:00 PM

deep love"all of me given all to you" deep emotions in this wonderfully penned poem-charma

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/1/2009 1:02:00 PM

The most wonderful kind of relationship, where you have such trust and faith in your love, you are totally free to surrender completely. It is a gift of gifts I know of and share. We are lucky. Such a beautiful write! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/1/2009 12:49:00 PM

Great description you have mentioned here, I like the title, it works well...Raul

Harry Charlton

Date: 4/1/2009 10:58:00 AM

crys :o) very nice im not one for bige words and meanings but this is great

Brian Strand

Date: 4/1/2009 8:57:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughtful blog comments today Lolita.Rgds Brian

Woodrow Lucas

Date: 4/1/2009 6:47:00 AM

Wow Lolita!! Excellent write here. I love the nexus of unconditional love and romantic fervor that you create here!! You are an awesome poet!! Thanks mucho, Wood

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/1/2009 4:51:00 AM

A heart that loves freely is the most beautiful sound to hear..this is a very good write and you captured the freedom very well....

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/1/2009 3:00:00 AM

Baby from the first lines I bought it all. Wonderfully passionate write.

John Rhinem

Date: 4/1/2009 1:22:00 AM

Smile~"Beautiful Write Precious & Truly Gifted Lena Townsend!!!:):)~What a very fortunate man indeed, to hold Your heart and Your love in such a way!!!:):)~I sincerely hope that he realizes what a very rare treasure of a lady that he holds!!?:):)~Soo much beautiful passion within this perfect write dear Lena~"Astonishingly Exquisite!!!:):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Sweet Dreams Dear!!!:):)

Brian Strand

Date: 4/1/2009 12:35:00 AM

Like the bio/kyrielle flavour here Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my Yellowstone series etc