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Underbelly Architecture

Concrete plane foresight Polyrhythmic totem stalk Waterfalls upward

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Elaine George

Date: 9/3/2009 5:22:00 AM

Dear Cesar, Powerful and extremly creative. lainie Thank you for your kind comments on my writing.

Date: 9/2/2009 8:32:00 AM

The imagery is so creative in this haiku. You grabbed my attention right away in line one. Much said in this concise form for the reader to reflect on. Keep on writing. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/2/2009 7:25:00 AM

so discriptive and true! Please enter a verse in my dialect contest if you haven't already? Light and Love Let us hear what the language of Mexico sounds like....in english of course. Yet we have enough spanish speakers for 2 versions!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/14/2009 9:20:00 AM

What a day. Some very unbelieveably outstanding writes I am reading today.Thank you for sharing yours with us Cesar. Love, Carol

Date: 8/13/2009 1:51:00 PM

What a creative view. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/13/2009 11:37:00 AM

Amazing image, Cesar. I was paddling a canoe on a river Monday where the water actually does stream upward! "Polyrhythmic totem stalk" is a brilliant image! Love, Carolyn