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Under the Introvert Sun

Your loosened hair Gleaming in the benign sun Roses in our blood inhale dense air Decking up before departure has begun The green is paling one by one It's the dance of death in colour A fountain of farewell with a hue For the cracking bones of October Palliating painters seated in queue Picasso brown red and blue The message on the train is as clear as an apple Our hues are too fleeting to hold Come let's dance dear before yellowing begins in maple Before our roots get too old Under the introverted autumn sun let's melt our gold October 20, 2020 Autumn Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Francine Roberts

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Date: 11/27/2020 1:22:00 AM
WoW! This a magnificently crafted poem, Probir. The mixture of colors as metaphor was expressed beautifully by you. Hope all is well with you, dear friend. Love and peace always.
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:10:00 PM
Dear Probir, the sweet beauty of emotions, spectacular imagery and metaphors takes my breath away. Every line displays brilliant artistry that captures my imagination and heart, especially the last three lines. I love Autumn in all “hues too fleeting to hold” and I love your poem! A fav!! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2020 9:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan ... as always, this time too, you are the fountain lavishing splashes ... I am honored, my dear friend ...

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