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Under Control

We live in a society that teaches us to control all the things we can’t, and accept no control of the things we can, namely, Ourselves, and our destiny Kale Brereton Jan 13/19

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/14/2019 3:59:00 AM

NICELY WRITTEN!

Kale Brereton
Date: 1/14/2019 5:33:00 AM

Thank you Valerie!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/13/2019 11:35:00 PM

so have to learn control own-self at first

Kale Brereton
Date: 1/14/2019 5:33:00 AM

I'm of the belief that the only thing we can truly control is ourselves. Thank you for the comment Mahtab!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/13/2019 11:07:00 PM

Sharp ink!! Well done.

Kale Brereton
Date: 1/14/2019 5:31:00 AM

Thank you Maureen!