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Tailspin wishes delicately lost in the wind Called out but whisper was after the crash Chaos so beautiful it forms part of the clouds Drifts on forever out of ears reach Raindrops share watered down reminiscences Puddles placate with diluted pain Streams carry off your worries for one day Dams disturb thought paths as if that was the plan Pieces so scattered you can hardly remember Logic so skewed that it barely makes sense Intense concentration cannot form a full picture Cycles and spirals of unknown intent

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Date: 4/1/2024 2:46:00 AM
Now that's a poem one can ponder for many meanings, loved it.
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Date: 4/1/2024 10:59:00 AM
How lovely! Thank you Arthur :) It was words just on the cusp of conscious thought - those kinds often make for interesting pondering, so thought I'd write them down :) thanks for your enthusiasm
Date: 3/30/2024 3:34:00 PM
Sounds like brainstorming- but a lot heavier, I love the part "Called out but whisper was after the crash Chaos so beautiful it forms part of the clouds" wow, a real pleasure to read
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Date: 3/30/2024 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Paige, I appreciate your visit. Glad you enjoyed the poem x
Date: 3/30/2024 10:06:00 AM
and we, poor poets, must pursue them about the blank pages of.....well....you know.....
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Date: 3/30/2024 10:13:00 AM
True John, just for everyone to prefer pop songs about dancing in clubs :)

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