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A hoarfrost weave of glistening alabaster crystals forms a brittle web of tenuous tentacles that creep across the frozen ground and up the trunks of trees, encapsulating their barren branches in an icy sheath, attesting to nature's immutable beauty. Dawn, pencils in light and shadow creating a surreal sketch bereft of color, drawn from the bristles of Autumn's phantasmagorical brush. In the interlude between the break of day and sunrise a formidable six-point buck skittishly prances into view, demurely projecting the illusion of a hallmark postcard. But the sound of crunching leaves underfoot, breaks the spell cast by unbroken silence. 10/28/2017

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Date: 3/19/2018 11:08:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/20/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support, as always my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/4/2017 8:33:00 AM
A skilled write, as usual, Emile. Your line, "Dawn pencils in light and shadow..." is a fine metaphorical example of your talent. Congratulations and well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/4/2017 10:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Lin, I truly appreciate your complementary comments and support my friend, Emile
Date: 11/3/2017 8:44:00 PM
This was just excellent Emile, an excellent shared 2nd place win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/4/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile
Date: 10/28/2017 6:05:00 PM
Your poem is as magnificent as the photograph that enhances it Emile! I am sure this entry will take top honors. You have managed to slip the required words into your poem in such a creative and seamless way! Bravo! : )
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/28/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thank you kindly Connie, once again you make me shine my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/28/2017 12:53:00 PM
Very, very smooth and readable and beautiful. Sometimes its so hard to incorporate unchosen words naturally.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/28/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunlite, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.

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