Ugliness of Beauty

Your words the sweetest Your face the loveliest How you dress, the cleanest How you walk, the smartest Mesmerized, starstruck I was Unmoved, glued feet I was My eyes followed you Taking note every cue Your laughter echoed in clutter Your voice makes you hotter Fonder, wonder and yonder I am to you thereafter I wish it's all true though Blinded I was, Cause behind such... Is an "ugliness of beauty.." By: olive_eloi 12:38 am 02/10/2014 ------------------------------------ --------------------------

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James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2014 12:58:00 PM

Ugliness and beauty are only words. Wonderful to the other, to the other absurd. Nice read again Olive, James....

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/14/2014 2:48:00 PM

LOL even if you do, you are still the beauty and me the beast!!! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/14/2014 3:46:00 PM

LOL!!!! :D FAIRYTALE :p

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/14/2014 2:28:00 PM

Hi there Olive, a wonderful poem!! Lucky you that you are beautiful both inside and out!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/14/2014 2:38:00 PM

:) thanks arthur.. :) hahahah.. :) but well i have torns an tails though sometimes.. :P

Michael Byte

Date: 2/10/2014 6:05:00 AM

Such a deep one here my friend. Makes people stop and think about what you have written. :-)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/12/2014 11:26:00 AM

HAhaha mike it' about pretentious... Beauty in the outside but inside ugliness