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My poem tells the story of two strangers who meet in Hiroshima and find a connection despite their language and cultural barriers. It also explores the themes of communication, friendship, love, understanding, and peace in a world of conflicts and violence.

 
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Upon a crowded street in Hiroshima, they met. From distant shores they came, seeking to get Some adventure, some beauty, some wonder, some answers. As they wandered aimlessly, feeling out of place. He was from the USA, she was from Russia. They did not share a tongue or culture. They asked for help, but no one understood. Their faces flushed, their mouths agape. Then their eyes met, and something sparked. They smiled and nodded, but they were in the dark. They realized they had something in common: un poco de español. It was not enough to bridge their gap. They spoke with broken words, but made no sense. They gestured with their hands, but were too intense. He said “Hola, me llamo Joe, y tú?” She said “privet, menia zovut Anya, a the” They looked at each other with doubt and dread. They scratched their heads, sighed, and moaned. Like lost travelers trying to crack the code Of their mysterious and foreign tongue. But then they laughed as they saw the humor In their predicament and plight. They relaxed as they felt the warmth and compassion In their gaze that pierced the gloom. He touched her hand gently and said “Perdón”. She touched his hand softly and said “izvini”. Their eyes sparkled with curiosity and delight, As if discovering a hidden gem. They wondered if they could ever make it right. They felt a bond, a thread that tied them tight. He said, “You are the moon that lights my way”. She said, “You are the sun that brightens my day”. Like flowers in the desert, like stars in the night, Like birds of different feathers, but with the same flight, They found each other in the most unlikely place, They shared a glimpse of paradise, a moment of grace, Joe did not think about their countries’ issues or their politics, Anya did not care about their differences or their conflicts, They only saw each other as human beings with hearts and souls, They only felt each other as friends and allies with common goals. Like children who play together without prejudice or fear. They slowly finished their tea and knew they would soon depart, They did not want to leave each other’s lost and lonely heart, He hugged her tightly like an anchor in the stormy sea, She hugged him tightly like an angel with heavenly glee. Like lovers who embrace each other with passion and sincerity. As they walked away with tears in their eyes, Turn, One long last embracing selfie with a forlorn Bonsai. Two strangers met on a crowded street. In a distant land where they came to seek. Some adventure, some beauty, some wonder … Some answers… they found something deeper and fonder. Friendship can blossom in the most unlikely places. Where an unseen world is full of inviting smiles and – ….. Paradisiacal embraces.

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Date: 12/1/2024 2:43:00 AM
So very true. Friendship breaks all barriers of nationality and language. Though they met as strangers, they parted as intimate friends or perhaps as lovers. What warmth emanated from their eyes! The intimacy they felt was a beautiful enigma that unfolded with a gentle touch. They were no more strangers, but friends who felt a sense of belonging that transcended the limitations of language, race or color. It is evident that love can strike anyone at any moment and friendship can sprout even among total strangers. The world then becomes a paradise. Lovely poem, dear Daniel.
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Date: 12/2/2024 9:55:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I am thrilled you went back and read one of my earlier PS postings. This particular poem came at a time when I thought about what would be like for two strangers from two different countries and languages where the countries hated each other met up at a WW2 nuked site being Hiroshima. I put a lot of underpinnings in this with them basically falling in love but the reality is they go back to their countries. Perhaps never to meet again. Thank you as always Valsa, I just love reading your insights! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 3/22/2024 6:58:00 AM
So free of impurities. So void of deception. A great story, Daniel. Loved it. So meaningful with so much depth. The kind of strangers we'd all like to meet. Blessings.
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Date: 3/22/2024 10:21:00 AM
Hello Curtis, Thanks for stopping by and reading this particular poem. It was one of the first of my new poems I posted on PS, but I was an unknown and did not get many readers. I always loved this poem. Thanks for your kind words, my friend! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/3/2024 5:27:00 PM
A very touching story, Daniel. Sometimes...more can be communicated with eyes and gestures than with words.
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Date: 3/3/2024 5:48:00 PM
Hello Elaine, I appreciate your visiting my poem. You are right that love is a universal language that can be understood through so many ways. Thanks again my friend! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 9/6/2023 11:06:00 AM
Hello Daniel Rodgers. I feel sadden for the couple unable to speak to one another. I must go my cat wants my attiention. /darlene\
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