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Veiled by twisted clouds, the sun shrunk, the sky turned purple black and my hometown morphed into junk; as though shredded by flack. Trees got torn from the ground and I cannot rebound; for my home's now a mound. The dead, draped in shrouds; veiled by twisted clouds.

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Date: 9/12/2021 9:46:00 AM
Incredibly fine, Emile. This form is not easy, and you nipped it in the bud! Loved your poem even thought the theme was devastating. Have a good week ahead!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, you continue to honor me my friend, Emile.

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