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Twirly

Tram stops Old lady asks "Am I twirly?" Conductor looks up tram and shakes his head On she gets and on we go As a young lad on the way to school I often wondered how old one had to be To be Twirly Three stops on the way were always empty Three stops in a row Trams all stopped The area was bombed out No complete houses stood No one ever asked why they stopped It made me proud to ride With folks like that Twirly or not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/12/2009 7:21:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:09:00 AM
Interesting perspective with a twist of wit. Sad situation in stanza 4. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:24:00 AM
I like your poem. I think it's cute, and witty.
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