Twilight

Sealing eyes of sky, Descend upon straps of light, Dusk…now dreams the night...

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 7:06:00 AM

Very well written!

Harpreet Kaur

Date: 1/28/2016 9:32:00 AM

This oozes peace and beauty!

Norman Crocker

Date: 7/22/2015 1:40:00 PM

Excellent imagery!

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:23:00 PM

FARAH, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 12:44:00 PM

Nice haiku, I love the form...Raul

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/13/2008 7:06:00 PM

Well, Farah you have created a nice vision of leaving for dreamland. Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/26/2008 9:36:00 AM

Yes! There is nothing like a restful night's sleep. This is so relaxing and soft to the touch. Eventually, after a long day the sandman cometh! Great job and excellent imagery! ~Joseph

Mc Mc

Date: 10/24/2008 9:11:00 PM

perfect!!! great!! thanks!!