Tuirse

I have been in unequaled turmoil, Overused in my personal trauma, Drowning in tear rivers of tragedy, Soul dipping southward trajectory, But they do not seep from these eyes, Nor do they follow the cries, Just the heavy emptiness that thrives, Within each breath hope in me dies, But then there are those who remind me, Why I have walked the road of words ardently, Thank you for reigniting my linguistic dream, I want you to know, that you are the intrinsic thread that holds my spirit seem.

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Sara Jama

Date: 4/21/2025 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations on receiving poem of the week my dear friend.

Billie Jama

Date: 4/21/2025 1:38:00 AM

Congratulations on receiving your first ever potw. I'm so proud to call you a friend. You are smashing it! And it was well deserved

Ink Empress

Date: 4/21/2025 1:33:00 AM

Congrats my mistress of dungeon, your first poem here and youv received POTW! Thrilled to see you here! Yass!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/20/2025 6:40:00 PM

It can be difficult to deal with, when you feel like you're ' drowning in personal drama. ' So wonderful when you have others there to help you. Even better knowing that God is always near. Congratulations Angela, on Poem of the Week. My best to you, and welcome to Poetry Soup. Hugs, Brandy

Karen Jones

Date: 4/20/2025 5:02:00 PM

Congratulations on potw!

Tom Woody

Date: 4/20/2025 12:46:00 PM

Congrats on POTW and welcome to PS. On that last word, did you mean seam?

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/20/2025 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW. A powerful write. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/20/2025 5:47:00 AM

Writing poetry is therapeutic Angela, good for the soul too. Welcome to PoetrySoup and congratulations on receiving the honour for poem of the week… Beryl

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/20/2025 4:51:00 AM

Angela, welcome to PS. Congratulations on POTW.

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/19/2025 11:12:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Billie Jama

Date: 4/16/2025 2:44:00 AM

Welcome Angel AKA The dungeon keeper/ mistress of dungeon. I'm so glad you took the plunge and joined poetry soup as more people should know about your incredibly talented ink. I enjoyed the transparency and resilience of you piece. That shift from despair to gratitude? Absolutely breathtaking. Thank your for sharing your light through the weight of your darkness.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/16/2025 1:37:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup my mistress of dungeon! So good to see you here!!!! And this poem made me tear up! Blessed are those that have well wishers lifting them up when all is but a confusion, and you have a beautiful heart and grateful soul, and that can be felt here especially in lines such as "But then there are those who remind me, Why I have walked the road of words ardently, Thank you for reigniting my linguistic dream" ah! Felt this! FAVE! hope to see you post more! Sending yu light always