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Tug of Self-War

Written on February 17, 2020 By Gail DeBole I read a quote the other day. It said you must improve today. I read a quote the other day. It said to love yourself – don’t change. Which quote was right? Which quote was wrong? Both made me weak. Both made me strong. And thus, the tug of war began. One side of me – quite content Was fighting all my discontent. One side of me – quite discontent Was fighting all my self-content. My ego – almost split in two Could not decide just what to do. And thus, the tug of war continued. Until one day, quite tired of this. My question was, "What had I missed?" Was there a balance I couldn’t see? Satisfied with what I was, could I be… A person who improved her lot Without a tug of war so taut? And thus, the tug of war ended.

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Date: 10/31/2020 8:31:00 PM
I really like your attitude with this clever, witty piece. Will stay in touch.
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Gail Debole
Date: 11/8/2020 5:40:00 PM
Hi Barbara, Thanks so much for stopping by. Glad to hear that you enjoyed this poem. - Best Regards, Gail
Date: 3/7/2020 8:10:00 AM
Enjoyed this clever rhyme, Gail. Perhaps the second quote meant "don't change to impress someone else." I think we should always try to improve but we should be true to ourselves and never change the person that we are (assuming we are a good person). Just my thoughts. John
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Gail Debole
Date: 3/7/2020 8:18:00 AM
Hi John, I agree with you! Thanks for stopping by and letting me know your thoughts. - Gail
Date: 2/19/2020 3:03:00 PM
Gail this is very clever. I also like the way you used 3 single lines after a series of couplets to change the pace and then to end it. I'll be reading more of your poems :) ~Mark
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Gail Debole
Date: 3/7/2020 8:17:00 AM
Hi Mark, Thanks for stopping by and for leaving your feedback! - Have a good day, Gail

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