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After the party, I woke up on a tropical island Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon 06/09/2024

Tropical Island

Tears behind the cocktails,
Rowing down to calmness
Oasis was found,
Pure life's gratitude
I found after my mistake.
Confident I feel while I'm breathing loneliness.
Awake with open eyes
Lonely in a tropical island.

Isolated in the middle of the world, I wonder. I wander.
Sun shines above me with compassion, but I'm struggling.
Lucky that I saw a boat I could call its attention.
Amazing I found the gate from beauty to engage reality.
Nice to wake up in spite of having a 
Delightful dream, or a nightmare, sweating in bed.
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Date: 7/30/2024 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Tropical Island" Acrostic write. Have a very fun day writing away...........
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/30/2024 3:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula. Love/María
Date: 6/9/2024 10:36:00 AM
A very descriptive acrostic, which really created the imagery of an island... Nicely constructed Maria..
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/10/2024 12:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One. I appreciate it. Have a nice week!
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