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Trip To The Mall

It's Saturday morning and off we go to the mall The traffic just to get there is painfully slow Upon arrival it seems that parking spots are tough to be found Up and down the rows of vehicles we finally get a break , someone is homeward bound As we enter the mall pushing and shoving starts to ensue We find an opening and make our way through The list of shops we have to visit much to long to count It now seems the headache I just developed has started to mount My credit card I know will take a pounding today It is going to take me months just to repay After a long day our shopping trip has finally came to an end Next weekend we will be back here again , this is becoming a trend

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Date: 5/7/2024 3:40:00 PM
Can you spell D-e-b-t? Cut up them thar credit cards Johnny, afore it's too late!
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John Campbell
Date: 5/7/2024 4:09:00 PM
Indeed my friend.

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