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I'm just a shadow seldom seen A soul once again forgotten Waiting on your beaconed path A path decayed and nearly rotten I stand very still as others fly by Or am I the one stuck in slow motion Caught in the daze of a sea of people Flowing by in their very own ocean When will you notice where I stand Will you ever reach out and call If it weren't for me stretching out my hand Would you come looking for me at all?

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:12:00 PM
Avery, congrats on your win with this emotive write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/21/2021 5:24:00 AM
Very Expressive. Congratulations!
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Avery Won
Date: 6/21/2021 6:17:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/18/2021 7:35:00 PM
Beautiful, expressive verse, Avery, with poignant imagery. Good writing!
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Avery Won
Date: 6/19/2021 4:29:00 AM
Thank you!

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