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Toys of Our Memories

Standing at the closet door buried deep within my mind I gather courage to venture there to see what’s left behind As the door swings gently open so many things I see the rainbows of illusions and so many shattered dreams But in the corner hiding is a memory soft and gay it pulls me closer to the spot where I used to play The place of innocence, the inner child yearning to be free laughing, singing, trusting all Come and play with me and further in the darkness there’s a light from loves I knew from family, friends and lovers all still burning true But the brightest toy to catch my eye is one of innocence it’s the gift you gave when first we met and sealed it with a kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/9/2009 4:09:00 AM
Wow, Trudy, this poem is awesome. It is a brilliant capture of life's trip through dreams, illusions, loves, and laughter. I'm going to favorite this one. Always DAS-J
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Date: 7/21/2009 11:42:00 AM
Beautifully written poem of past memories from childhood, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 8:33:00 AM
Sweet memories....lovely way to keep it from the heart! ~ Great job, Trudy! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/18/2009 3:39:00 PM
Such a whimsical and heart touching poem. So very well written and simply a joy to read. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/18/2009 3:15:00 PM
I love the way you build suspense in the beginning and then allow us to journey back with you into your childhood. The last verse is outstanding! Excellent poem, Trudy! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/18/2009 12:18:00 PM
Nice images of childhood in your poem. The sweet bird of youth flies swiftly. Nice work. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/17/2009 10:00:00 PM
yes! what a truly beautiful "age of innocence" poem! Trudy! I love it jim
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