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Written, June 22, 2024
For the contest, Poetry Should be Felt, Rather Then Understood
Sponsor, Suzette Richards

Vision Quest - Crystalinks

I want you to feel this experience as I did the glow of the sun and ripple of water paddles stroking blue on a quest bird songs echoing taste, smell the movement of air with thoughts positive floating a storm on the shore my canoe a shelter far from the river and lost walking among forest trees the green hush of wilderness touching anger, fear, disgust on, on, on and on through the tangle towards the sound of water grasp the sight of the coolness feel the aura, sense it deep in the green with courage and faith on a quest to find self and I did as I float down the river proud

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Date: 6/22/2024 9:10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Wonderful write with a great picture. Oh yes, we can feel words. "Good Luck" in the contest. We both did this one. Have A Blessed Day/Weekend Writing Away.............
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Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2024 9:18:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the compliment and comment, let me go see yours, hugs

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