Total Surrender

Looked into her eyes Cupid's arrows his heart found Total surrender! © Demetrios Trifiatis 29 March 2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 3/30/2017 5:34:00 AM

Wonderful words dear Demetrios. A7+

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2017 8:48:00 PM

Nice :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2017 1:35:00 AM

Thank you!

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/29/2017 1:58:00 PM

Lovely Demetrios...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2017 3:45:00 PM

Thank you so much dear, Charlie!

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/29/2017 10:27:00 AM

An absolute love haiku ... Wonderful indeed !

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2017 11:24:00 AM

Thank you indeed my good friend, Probir for your delightful visit and comment!

Chris Green

Date: 3/29/2017 7:28:00 AM

Love is just like that. Nicely done Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2017 11:28:00 AM

After so many decades on this planet I have got an idea what love is all about dear friend, Chris! Haha! Thank you so much!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/29/2017 7:12:00 AM

What a wise man. Well said.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2017 11:33:00 AM

How lovely to see you again dear, Scott. Thank you so much!