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Too Far Gone

Her eyes shone like diamond pools, Only in distant memories and dreams. Once loving heart intensely beats, Exploding, bursting at the seams. The sweet voice of lullabies, Ever vacant, ever hollow. The sun always made her glow, In despair it simply wallows. Waves of time, Of intuition. Ever rarely, In her vision. Nerium bloomed, In her bright smile. Alone once more, In exile. Her eyes refused, No longer shone. That day I knew, She was too far gone. Date: 07/24/2022 Contest title: Pick-A-Title, Vol 31 Poetry Contest Title Chosen: "Too Far Gone" Name of sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 8/11/2022 3:01:00 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem ... hopefully there will be many more in the future - :)
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Date: 7/25/2022 7:12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you. (By the way, please check the contest requirements... The title chosen must be mentioned.)
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Date: 7/26/2022 1:25:00 PM
Thank you! I just updated the poem to include that now.

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