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Tonight's Detractions

Stars play all day, OK can't come out tonight Moon's unavailable too, by the way second-degree burns from the sunlight Earthlings, amuse yourselves in the dark gaze upward from a graveyard or trailer park

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 8:26:00 AM
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Those last two lines are amusing. No matter what is happening here you can look for escape in the stars…
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/24/2023 8:38:00 PM
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As they tried to tell me: 'Keep looking up. Don't look down!' ~ Former Empire State Building Window-Washer
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 10/23/2023 11:53:00 PM
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I like this Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/24/2023 8:41:00 PM
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And it likes you too, Vickey. Nice to see your avatar! ~ Gershon
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David Fisher
Date: 10/23/2023 5:37:00 PM
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A fun take of the sky show! Funny, I play all day in the graveyard next to the trailer park.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2023 6:36:00 PM
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Stick around in the graveyard tomorrow for the witching hour! ~ Elizabeth Montgomery and Agnes Moorehead
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John Lawless
Date: 10/23/2023 5:41:00 AM
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even the moon needs a night off now and then
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2023 6:25:00 PM
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Perhaps it's moonlighting. ~ Starring Elsewhere
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/22/2023 9:41:00 PM
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Interesting, especially the salutation to earthlings.thumb up.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2023 6:16:00 PM
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Heh-heh. Hadn't thought about 'earthlings' for a while, actually. ~ Man in the Moon

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