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Together We Were a Pencil

together we were a pencil i would write down all our dreams then you would erase them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/22/2012 5:29:00 PM
LILLIAN, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD
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Date: 11/20/2012 7:04:00 AM
[smudged charcoal/ on a full page--the kettle whistles] Light & Love
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Date: 11/15/2012 12:07:00 PM
Good one Lillian. - Welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Wish you luck. - Give comments and get comments. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2012 8:36:00 PM
Hi Lillian, what a great write, I agree with Michael, didn't see the end coming. Rollo
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Date: 11/12/2012 7:33:00 PM
Never saw the ending coming. Great poetry. Very very good!! Michael
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