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An ivory brush he runs through her grey tresses, a flannel, hot water, refreshes her face, her feelings of gratitude anyone's guesses he gives a sad smile as she stares into space. His hands are the guides who will take her and lead her through myriad functions and chores of the day, take turns with a cup,knife or fork as he feeds her calming touch when she rocks, firmly grip when she sways. No action is taken of her own volition, arms flop in her lap like a puppet, no strings, he lives her day for her and needs no permission for such is the license that years of love bring. Engaged, dawn to dusk in one-sided conversation, now sadly resigned to the sound of one voice, spark of recognition there's no indication but still he keeps talking, for he has no choice. Another day over, another year passes, anniversaries come with no reason to cheer, there will be no more music or raising of glasses, Crystal out on display just one soft silent tear. But the bond that's between them is still strong and unseen, though their faces contrast,hers is blank, his is kind, for love is still there to the fore, always has been, his shines from his eyes, hers is locked in her mind. Each dab of the flannel, with each stroke of her tresses, each slow ticking minute through which he must tend, with these tokens of love every day he confesses, these bouquets of hearts that are hers 'till the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/12/2019 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful and poignant write, Viv. Your writing has always been exceptional to me! :)
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Date: 10/26/2019 2:23:00 PM
What an exceptional piece Viv. My mom was inflicted by old age dementia for many years.
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Date: 10/18/2019 6:04:00 AM
Such a beautiful descriptive write about devotion. This bought a tear to my eye. So good to see you writing, Viv. Hope you are not too busy with your ‘naked butler’ job....lol. SuZ
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Date: 9/21/2019 9:14:00 PM
Very sad. Is this about your wife?
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/25/2019 2:00:00 PM
That's a relief!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/21/2019 10:37:00 PM
Fortunately not, Jean, but inspired by a couple I have known since childhood x
Date: 9/8/2019 7:59:00 AM
So great to see you posting my friend, hope you are keeping up with the top floor show.... this an honest poem...
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Date: 9/8/2019 2:27:00 AM
Such a sad reality Viv that we see often. Well written. Tom.
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