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Sometimes you have to let the morning have its way, set out its wide sunlit spaces like a tablecloth upon your silence, speak to you softly in the sound of leaves, bright with the flush of spring. There is much to tell, the stories of its winter dreaming, waking to a warming sun, desires erupting in flower and fruit. As a child I listened to the almond trees clack their naked limbs all winter long until late august when the first blossoms broke into the chilly air with their white whispers and perfumed breath hushed out of pink throats. It was my eucharist, trees donning their green vestments plump with promises. I must make space in myself to receive the sacraments of creation, have a reverence for what comes forth to speak a name in all that is born, lives and dies and reflects a beauty to which I can be blind to in the bloat of myself.

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Date: 9/30/2024 9:09:00 AM
Paul, l am so sorry l missed your special honour of receiving POTD for another unbelievably captivating Paul poem. This is such a beautiful write Paul and so worthy of POTD….I was there once again with you enjoying every emotion and appreciating creation! Ive missed our journeys my friend!!!….my life has been full of late! Debx oops….Congratulations!!!
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/1/2024 4:04:00 AM
So good to hear from you Deb. I too have been in another universe of late...quick trips back to reality to lodge a poem, then off again. Getting back to normal. So grateful for your comments, they serve as a much valued tonic. Take care my friend.... Paul
Date: 9/15/2024 7:01:00 PM
It was a joy to notice another accolade for you, Paul, and a deeply evocative poem. I do ofcourse enjoy the pictures you paint with those masterful pen-strokes. In particular I take to heart "I must make space in myself to receive the sacraments of creation" which I will add to my daily mantra. Thank you, Paul. Glad you are here. Blessings S:) x
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Date: 9/16/2024 9:23:00 PM
Hi Sam, feel honored to receive such positive comments...my sincere thanks. It is always a pleasure to learn when a poem connects and conveys something that resonates....gives the confidence levels a lift. Poetry can be an intensely private activity but still requires an audience to fully connect to its broader purpose. I indeed appreciate your thoughtful visit my friend. Take care, Paul
Date: 9/14/2024 10:02:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Paul! Love the lovely comparisons.
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Date: 9/15/2024 5:23:00 PM
Hi Kim many thanks for taking the time to read the poem and for your POTD congratutory note, appreciated. Cheers, Paul
Date: 9/14/2024 7:12:00 AM
An enjoyable read Paul I moved to the countryside over 30 years ago, best move I ever made, Belated congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/15/2024 5:18:00 PM
Thankyou Tom for your kind words. Sounds like you have found a place where nature and the landscape speaks. Good move. Regards, Paul
Date: 9/13/2024 2:05:00 AM
Wonderful to see you honoured with POTD Paul, congratulations :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 4:40:00 PM
Wonderful also my dear DD to receive your kind words...always a treasured guest and friend in my little world. Take care, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 8:48:00 PM
These wonderful words that herald a blossoming almond tree is like hearing music in the wind. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:37:00 PM
Thankyou dear Hilda....such lovely comments, my sincere appreciation for reading the poem and giving it some thought. Valued, regards Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 5:40:00 PM
' Sometimes you have to let the morning have its way. ' This thought brings a smile. :) It's the best time to reflect and be thankful. Throughout the day, blessings overflow indeed. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:34:00 PM
Thankyou so much dear Brandy for your comments and for giving the poem your time....value the support and feel honored by your kind words. Pleased that this poem gave cause for a smile, gifted with appreciation my friend. Cheers, Paul
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/12/2024 7:21:00 PM
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Date: 9/12/2024 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. So profound - a marvellous spiritual piece - I am mesmerized with its depth and your choice of words to express oneness with Nature!
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:27:00 PM
Quite moved by your lovely words dear Malabika, thankyou. Pleased that the poem found a kindred soul. Take care, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 3:17:00 PM
eloquently expressed - a pleasure
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:22:00 PM
Pleased that the poem found a kind ear my friend. Thankyou for reading and commenting. Kind regards, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thankyou Benjamin for reading the poem and for your comments. Valued...kind regards, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 1:31:00 PM
Paul, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:19:00 PM
Thankyou so much dear Tania....appreciated. Give Ziggy an extra hug from me and a doggy treat. Take care my friend, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 12:53:00 PM
So profound! Excellent writing Paul. Most worthy of the honor, POTD.
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:14:00 PM
So good to hear from you Daniel...thankyou for your kind words and support...there from the start of my PS journey and treasured. Take care my old friend, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 12:29:00 PM
Nice to see what was actually the best poem of the day rewarded as such. Most deserving, Paul. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 4:11:00 PM
Humbled by your words Gershon....value your opinion my friend. Thankyou once again, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 12:18:00 PM
Always a treat to capture POTD, Paul. Nicely crafted piece. :o))
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 4:07:00 PM
Indeed...feel honored. Value your comments Arlo and for spending a little tine with the poem. Matters to me. Cheers, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 11:48:00 AM
Hellpo Paul Willason, Congratulations on your POPTD. Enjoy your special day. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/13/2024 4:10:00 PM
Hello Paul ,You are welcome Paul. You enjoy your weekend. Warm regards /DArlene/
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 4:04:00 PM
Very much appreciate your kind words Darlene. Thankyou for reading the poem. Warm regards, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 10:25:00 AM
I love the first two lines, Paul...and then all the others are rivetingly mesmerizing. An excellent selection for POTD.
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:02:00 PM
Thankyou Jim....honored by your words. Pleased that you found the poem to be a worthwhile read...always music to a poet. Cheers my friend,
Date: 9/12/2024 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. It made my morning. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:58:00 PM
Thankyou dear Paula for reading the poem and gracing it with such lovely words. Very much appreciated. Take care, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 6:27:00 AM
Yes, it's easy to get wrapped up in the bubble of existence, especially in this modern plasticized, mechanized and increasingly, virtual world. Spending time in nature can help us reset, reexamine our values. As for me, heading to the Smokies later this month. Enjoy your day in the sun
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Date: 9/13/2024 3:27:00 PM
These days the healing properties of nature are not to be undervalued...essential for our souls. Thankyou Tom for stopping by and leaving your kind words. Take care.
Date: 9/12/2024 4:03:00 AM
Paul, what a wonderful write, full of personal expression and the beauty of nature! I shall let my morning have its way while contemplating it this day! Congratulations on your POTD honors!
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:24:00 PM
Good to hear from you Mike...thankyou for yr complimentary words, very much appreciated and valued. Do hope your morning spoke in gentle tones and welcomed you warmly... Cheers, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 1:13:00 AM
- Congratulations, I moved from the city into almost untouched nature ...I enjoy every minute :) -
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:21:00 PM
May nature receive your kind presence with joy my dear Anne-Lise...thankyou for reading and commenting. Cheers.
Date: 9/12/2024 1:07:00 AM
An absolutely marvellous spiritual write, Paul, a clear fav, thanks for sharing and warmest congratulations on POTD
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:18:00 PM
So pleased the poem found such a welcoming soul...thankyou dear US
Date: 9/12/2024 1:03:00 AM
What a poignant potd! Congratulations!
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:16:00 PM
Thankyou so much Karen for your kind words...take care, Paul
Date: 9/12/2024 1:02:00 AM
Back with congratulations Paul, on a totally deserving POTD, not very often a piece like this comes along, so all the more it should be recognised with appropriate honours, (enjoy this space) cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:14:00 PM
So honored by your gracious words...sincere thanks. Paul
Date: 9/11/2024 9:11:00 PM
Wonderful metaphor -- sacred and sanctified. I've always thought of the forest as a vast cathedral, which hopefully will never turn evil. Bravo, Paul! A FAVE for me. Thank you!
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:13:00 PM
Sincere thanks Gershon for reading the poem and taking the time to comment. Moved by yr kind words my friend. May the forest continue to welcome you. Chees.
Date: 9/11/2024 12:02:00 PM
Always great to bring religious imagery into our poems Paul, seems to enhance the work when done right (just like here), we are indeed part of nature, its sights, sounds, and silence, a beautifully crafted piece, top poem, cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/13/2024 3:09:00 PM
Thankyou David for your thoughtful comments...you always seem to get into a poem with that mind of yours...a skill I value and enjoy. Appreciated...
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