Tipping Point

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We have gone from the bottom of the barrel (drought) to overflow. Boaters being told to stay off lake and warning of bacteria in the river as they dump the overflow!

rain is tipping boats squandering lake’s treasury — dire river dump 6/1/2018

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/1/2018 9:10:00 PM

Oh Kim, I love your middle line 'squandering lake's treasury'.. Excellent imagery in your haiku. I relish your poet's notes as well.. from one extreme to the other.. I hope things improve quickly. Warmest wishes to you! ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2018 9:56:00 PM

Thank you! It really has been one extreme to the other. Then it looked like it was going to rain for two days...didn’t! And today I get caught outside in a rainstorm. Crazy weather!