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Time Travelling

Traveling zipping backwards; history’s expanding... parallels radiated blurs; eclipsing centuries.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 11:26:00 PM

I am thinking of the "Back to the Future" movies, and the time machine. Sweet!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/11/2019 2:02:00 PM

Great movie.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/4/2019 7:02:00 PM

Well done! Sometimes time travel is good but like all things it can be used for evil too.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:50:00 AM

Yes, that's a concern to consider for those who want to do so. Thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/1/2019 8:36:00 PM

i have always thought it would be cool to travel back in time...love the way you penned this one, very imaginable :) hugs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:50:00 AM

Me too. Thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2019 3:35:00 PM

Great one,, zipping backwards:)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:50:00 AM

Thanks much.

Anna Hopper

Date: 9/1/2019 2:30:00 PM

Lovely!! One of my most favorite subjects!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:51:00 AM

Good, thank you.

Ann Foster

Date: 9/1/2019 7:49:00 AM

Wonderful... I am right there, in time machine. I can see it all happening, re-happening and getting ready to happen... Ann

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:51:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/1/2019 5:12:00 AM

Going backwards in time - wish we could go backwards or forward - your 2nd verse in your haiku says it all - parallels found, eclipsing centuries. A clever write, hope I got it right! Hugs, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:51:00 AM

Yes, thank you.