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Time Cannot Erase

My mind reels through your last days love Helpless we were to do anything but pray Through my selfish tears I let you go No cure no treatment nothing to say My dearest friend you were to me Impossible to ever replace again But my love to know you suffer no more Everlasting sleep until the end Your transformation was so severe Healthy and full to skin and bone But your soul remained strong love Irregardless of the damage being done I know you are listening to me my love To these words I write for you No one can ever Take your place In this earthly world I bid you adeiu’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/23/2018 6:58:00 AM
Somethings time can never erase, especially certain memories.. a touching poem Kelli...
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Kelli White
Date: 2/23/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you very much SO. It’s taken awhile to write this.
Date: 2/23/2018 5:39:00 AM
Quite touching Kelli..a heartfelt tribute to a loved one..as you say, the pain never goes away.
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Kelli White
Date: 2/23/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay.
Date: 2/23/2018 12:32:00 AM
So sad, yet your devotion to his memory plain to see, stay true Kelli, my condolences for your loss... Mick
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Kelli White
Date: 2/23/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Mick.
Date: 2/22/2018 9:39:00 PM
lovely letter to your love, such a sad helpless time, however you've shown a true love, hugs kelli.
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Kelli White
Date: 2/22/2018 10:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Lewis. Beauty and pain always leave their mark on my brain.

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