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Thy Native Land

The island Once naive now tainted by the winds of change Once native now giving birth to a race of diverse cultures Once a peaceful place now disturbed by a rapid modern world The island Once their home our home my home has become an uncertain place in the heart

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/3/2024 12:48:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Ending. Life is always changing Not always for the good. I wish you would write more... Have a blessed day writing away........................

Patti Pedrus
Date: 7/3/2024 1:00:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement. God bless you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 2:38:00 PM

Patti, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Patti Pedrus
Date: 6/27/2024 3:51:00 AM

Thank you Linda!

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 2:32:00 AM

Patti, Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Patti Pedrus
Date: 6/27/2024 3:51:00 AM

Thank you SKAT!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/18/2013 10:03:00 AM

Profound write this! It is never easy when the place we call home becomes destroyed right in front of our eyes - you've brought it out well. Well penned Patti!

Patti Pedrus
Date: 6/27/2024 3:52:00 AM

Thank you Vicky!

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/10/2013 5:09:00 PM

Lost... and found. Write on. Tell us more!

Patti Pedrus
Date: 6/27/2024 3:52:00 AM

Thank you and I shall!

Mary Blevins

Date: 3/17/2011 11:50:00 AM

Thank You, Patti, what a wonderful poem.

Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:15:00 PM

U r welcome

Karen Croft

Date: 3/15/2011 4:08:00 PM

very well put about your home. welcome to poetry soup.

Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:15:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words:)

John. M Diketane

Date: 3/14/2011 7:10:00 AM

Very true and insightful work

Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:16:00 PM

Thanks

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 4:18:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Patti. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:17:00 PM

Thanks

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/13/2011 3:08:00 PM

welcome to poetry soup,very nice creative work

Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:17:00 PM

Thanks

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/13/2011 5:52:00 AM

Creative and thoughtful write on Lost Culture, Patti

Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:22:00 PM

Thank you:)