Thunder

I crash and boom People fear me I lash and loom None come near me I rock and roll Children I scare You can't control My anger flare Lightning's my bro Rain's my sister Where'er she'll go I'll assist her

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2024 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Thunder" personification write/story. Love your great ending. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/5/2024 7:08:00 PM

Joanna, wonderfully penned, congratulations on your winning placement.

Valsa George

Date: 3/25/2024 9:04:00 PM

Simple and sweet with beautiful rhyming! Your personification of thunder and lightning as brother and sister is so original and apt, dear Joanna. The one thing I fear most is thunder. As a child, I used to hide in dark spaces whenever there was a thunderstorm. Even now that fear lingers. All the Best dear friend.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/25/2024 7:47:00 PM

Dear Joanna, this thought brings a smile. ' Lightning's my bro, rain's my sister. ' :) Such a clever way to express thunder and the companions that like to stay connected. I love the rain. Even a thunderstorm, one that doesn't cause any damage. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 3/25/2024 3:28:00 AM

Lovely write Jo, I especially liked the last stanza

Daisy Meadows

Date: 3/25/2024 2:02:00 AM

Good description of the thunder. Well done.