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Three Brothers' Way

golden sunset in a hazy summer day in Georgia. three brothers long estranged step gently through matted thorns. comes a clearing by a pond. one brother speaks. another points. and the third lifts his gun and fires. the blast sends ringing ears and gun-flashed acrid smell, flocks of birds take flight. a stick leaps from the pond -- tumbling and twisting in air, spraying golden droplets of bitter-stagnant water. ripples dash over the surface -- bouncing through cattails and wrapping ‘round stumps. the blast’s echo dies away and the pond settles down. the brothers sit on moss-covered earth with ill-timed humor and stilted laughter. the sunset shines violet now. and from somewhere nearby, an owl hoots.

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Date: 10/16/2024 5:38:00 PM
I liked this fun with guns poem. There was a sense of survival, not only for three brothers, but for birds and owls as well. All's good while the sun goes down. I sense the down to earth country folk that stick together.
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