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This Universe Is Water Soluble

I was washed clean Ready to start again What it is I don't know Exhaustion, brain washing, sense? I'm not sure if I'm watching myself from afar So after showdown I went to the Game and Country Show as planned (complaining slightly) but then I chose a pomegranate and rose gin that I'll try once but never get round to drinking Saw some cute dogs, had a go at riflery and despite the faff I made of trying to load it was quite a sharp shooter, threw some axes... All is calm, I can still picture myself in tears and I think that's still me The countdown is back on I've gone from all wrong to can do no wrong Maybe I wake in alternate realities when I open and close my eyes Cry away the fabric of a parallel universe and fall straight through Maybe I always have

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Date: 8/28/2023 4:14:00 PM
we have to compare realities, the title is awesome, enjoyed yann
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:27:00 PM
Alternate realities..interesting bio
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Date: 8/28/2023 3:13:00 PM
Thank you - just a random thought rather than a philosophy but who knows, maybe I'm right
Date: 8/28/2023 12:44:00 PM
An interesting concept parallel universes, I love the way you crafted this into your poem, it’s quite sad but beautiful too, and morphs the day out at a country fair into a different reality, water soluble universe, I’ve no doubt it is, when seen through human eyes, poetry on the cusp again, cheers David
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Date: 8/28/2023 1:26:00 PM
I've ran out of explanations, so quantum physics searching rather than soul searching now :)

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