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This Gentle Breeze

And so this gentle breeze does sigh as it listens to all my words, and away they now softly fly given wings as if they were birds. As now it drys away my tears, and so this gentle breeze does sigh, hearing all my doubts and fears for to the air I did weep and cry. Into my soul it seems to pry as quietly my words were thrown. And so, this gentle breeze does sigh as to the wind my thoughts have flown. And so a little more at ease, soothed, my troubles, for now, float on by carried away by small degrees and so, this gentle breeze, does sigh.

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Date: 3/6/2013 2:18:00 PM
Well done, a most pleasing read. I just need to do the do for awhile. I have more stuff on my plate and need to scrape it off. Take care and Good luck in your writing.
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Date: 3/3/2013 6:53:00 PM
I just loved reading this wonderfully written poem, Emma, and especially liked that fantastic final line! It was truly a beautiful write. Carl.
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Emma Mantle
Date: 3/4/2013 3:38:00 AM
Thanks Carl for your kind words. Em :)
Date: 3/2/2013 2:20:00 PM
that' s a somewhat emotional expressed poem, nice rhyming,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Emma Mantle
Date: 3/3/2013 6:42:00 AM
Thanks Erich, appreciate you stopping by to read. Em

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