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These Two Old Pups

These two old pups are near and dear; I’ve kept them both throughout the years. Lyra’s brindle, still cheetah-fast; Lemony’s best years, in the past. The thought of losing brings a tear. When daughter schooled quite far from here and had them crated, it was clear they could not last, were much harassed, these two old pups, so I kept Lyra for a year. Then, there’s the time Lem’ disappeared; she got away from us quite fast, a week in snow, did somehow last, and then like magic, reappeared! These two old pups… ————— For Your Favorite Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh Written on 04/15/2022

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Date: 5/13/2022 9:45:00 AM
Precious pets immortalized in your plaintive rondeau that touches the hearts of all animal lovers Jeff. Congratulations. Blessings.
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Date: 5/13/2022 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with "These two old pups." A cute story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Date: 5/13/2022 7:46:00 AM
Great rondeau, congratulations.
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Date: 5/12/2022 8:07:00 PM
A beautiful and sentimental write! Congratulations, Jeff!
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Date: 5/12/2022 6:58:00 PM
Great on pets. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2022 2:23:00 PM
Wha a sweet and touching story, sounds like those two old pups have given you a lot a memories, congratulations on your win~
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Date: 5/12/2022 12:10:00 PM
Love this. Awesome writing. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/15/2022 8:14:00 PM
Oh bless…..what a heartfelt touching poem Jeff which dog lovers/owners will relate to.We had our dog for 16yrs and when he passed it was devastating….as they are our family. Unfortunately, their death is inevitable though we wish they would live forever. Enjoy your beautiful old pups Jeff ….what a gift they are! Debx
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