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There's Ice In Your Eyes

there's ice in your eyes not being judgemental, I'm only relating to a fundamental-ice is cold 'N there's ice in your eyes..I suppose there were more than 1 calamity in your life-so severe they became icicles-the warm tears that is, like a diamond they pounded and pounded until the broken edges became sharpened and glistening-then they pounded again and again til the diamond wuz no more and like broken glass pieces they were sharp 'N ready to cut somebody.. but then I think that's your pain I see 'N the power of your cold stare is not to cut me and make me bleed but to remind me these 2 icicles were once 2 warm tears.

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Date: 9/22/2015 7:35:00 PM
I was looking at an old cowboy and Indians flick and one said to the other: There's ice in your eyes..then I said..I kin write a poem about that! love and peace, montyrocke
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