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The Witches of Halloween

Face to face with the witches of Halloween curse black jellybeans Zombie doctors, unbeating hearts out of whack raisins giving back Mad scientists, green goggles, double helix rejecting trail mix Undead bug blasters, squishing out eight-legged lice No to apple slice String cheese does not bring Candy's following Face to face with the witches of Halloween... 10/30/18

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John Watt

Date: 9/14/2020 12:46:00 PM

Really clever use of this form to describe the ghoulish trick-or-treaters in line 1 and the health food snacks they reject in line 2. I remember trick-or-treating as a kid (back in the Teddy Roosevelt administration) and receiving Alka-Seltzer tablets for indigestion! Very funny - wish I'd brought an egg for his front window! Super fun to read, thank you for the recommendation (which I just saw today, sadly!)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/14/2020 10:26:00 PM

No worries - funny how Halloween is over a month away but we're hearing a lot about it, wonder how trick or treating will work with covid?

John Michaels

Date: 11/19/2018 11:32:00 AM

A playful write with a great rhythm. Nicely done, Michelle. Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/25/2018 7:00:00 PM

Thanks so much, John.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/16/2018 3:13:00 PM

Awesome rhyme you got up there :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/16/2018 10:51:00 PM

Thank you, Debbie, for your kind compliment!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/1/2018 3:45:00 PM

Oh that's a good one; best of luck with the contests.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/4/2018 6:29:00 PM

Thanks for your comment!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/31/2018 5:08:00 AM

Reminds me of some lady (probably married to or was a dentist herself) handing out toothbrushes for Halloween! Word spread fast not to go to her place! LOL. Loved these! Have a Happy Halloween! : )

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/1/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thanks, Connie, Happy Halloween to you too!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/30/2018 4:59:00 PM

Ahahahaha- This is so hilarious, Michelle! ;D So perfectly penned (and true)! LOVE it!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/30/2018 10:55:00 PM

Thanks for your comment, my friend-

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2018 1:08:00 PM

- The power of the spirits ... Halloween has become a fun celebration for big and small .... with witches, vampires, ghosts, zombies and monsters are creepy things - Good luck in the contest, Michelle :) - Happy Halloween :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/30/2018 1:30:00 PM

Thanks, hope you enjoy your Halloween!

Chris Green

Date: 10/30/2018 12:46:00 PM

This was so funny...it hit me at the second verse what you were saying and couldn't stop laughing. Really cool Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/30/2018 1:30:00 PM

Thanks, Chris, happy you liked it (I always hated getting something 'healthy' when I was a kid!)

Chris Green
Date: 10/30/2018 12:48:00 PM

I forgot, best of luck in the contest.