The Winter's Icicles

Winter be wary Sharp icicles hang houses Better not look up

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/20/2021 7:15:00 PM

Oh my ! I promise not to look up- while standing directly under them. (They are beautiful though, from a distance) Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Justin Abdool
Date: 2/21/2021 7:10:00 AM

Hey Brandy. I agree, don't look up or you might regret it! But yes there are a beautiful sparkle from a distance! I'm glad I made you smile :) Have a great a day!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/20/2021 4:10:00 PM

Hello Justin Abdool, so nice to meet you.yes the icicles are dangerous hanging from the roofs of houses. You never know when they will fall. enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2021 11:59:00 AM

Hello Justin Abdool, it also means that the house with the icicles are not properly heated in the winter. Enjoy your day my friend.

Justin Abdool
Date: 2/21/2021 7:06:00 AM

Hi Darlene. It is nice to meet you too. Your absolutely right! those icicles are very unpredictable and you just never know when they will fall! Thankfully it's only seasonal. Have a good day & thanks for commenting!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/19/2021 7:51:00 PM

Hi Justin, I enjoyed this, icicles can be very dangerous - clever humor on the last line too!

Justin Abdool
Date: 2/20/2021 6:49:00 AM

Thanks Michelle. Yes, I agree they can be dangerous. So we best keep our distance! I'm glad you found the last line to be humorous. There always is humor even in something dangerous as this. Have a great day.