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The Winding Road She walked a winding road, encompassed by dark trees, at first, with apathy and deep thoughts far away; but soon stopped short with consternation as the breeze whispered unearthliness in such unnatural sway. Two paths appeared...her predilection was to veer, with reverence, towards the right, which made it clear... God's grace spared condemnation of her life that day. November 6, 2018 Premiere Contest: 7 Lines, 7 Words Sponsor: Lu Loo Rhyme Scheme: A-B-A-B-C-C-B Required words appear in bold print.

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Date: 11/6/2018 4:34:00 PM
A very original and intriguing use of the prescribed vocabulary,Sandra leaving the reader wondering what might have been in store for her had she ventured onto the other path.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/18/2018 6:44:00 PM
I am so pleased you like it, Wendy, and thanks for the wonderful comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/6/2018 9:37:00 AM
Very well written using these words required Sandra! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/18/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi, for your supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra

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