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The Wind May Cripple

the wind may cripple within the darkest corners bask in the sunlight Russell Sivey

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2017 8:06:00 PM

A stunning haiku Russell with strong imagery and juxtaposition. Beautiful message of love and hope! And I gather, from the comments below, that you were in a terrible accident in late summer it seems.., I'm so sorry for that but happy that you are here, healing and commenting on our poetry my friend! Sending healing thoughts... :)

White Wolf

Date: 9/2/2017 5:19:00 AM

First time I've read your work, Russell. I love this succinct form and find it challenging in the sense of not to use too many "filler" words! To me, the wind holds just as many mysteries as the other elements. Really enjoyed your haiku, my new friend! As much as the days have their shades so do the nights have their lights! /|\

Eve Roper

Date: 9/1/2017 8:23:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Russell, enjoyed reading. Thank you and Emma for reading my poem.. I did change the word... Hugs Eve ~`*

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/1/2017 2:24:00 PM

from dark to sunlight; what a marvelous juxta, dear friend russell... you are on to reckon with in the haiku department... healing prayers for you...huggs

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/1/2017 10:05:00 AM

A ray of hope...stay well my friend...a great haiku...god bless...^WW^

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/1/2017 8:21:00 AM

Russell are you Hailing? Yay!!!!!!! Kind of scary but true. Stay in the warmth dear friend.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 10:16:00 AM

The word is Haikuing not hailing

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/1/2017 7:36:00 AM

Wondrous my friend, Russell! Pray you get well and strong soon!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2017 7:21:00 AM

Very important Haiku. Beautiful with a message. Yes, we need to bask in the sunlight in this life. Praying for healing for you Russell. Our thoughts are with you. Take care ! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2017 5:39:00 AM

Good advice Russell--enjoy the moment we have--so hard to do--well written!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2017 4:57:00 AM

Russell wanted to jump in and write some Haikus like everybody else. So here is one that I liked, maybe you will enjoy it too. Emma :)