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Poetry/Sonnet/The Whispers Of Autumn
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Written, August 28, 2024
For the International Contest, The Whispers of Autumn
Sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 09/23/2024

Seventh Place

Awakenings of Bel Air - Every leaf speaks bliss to me, fluttering from the  Autumn Tree. - Emily Bronte | Facebook

I know a forest where the trees grow old, and standing quiet I hear their sad sighs; weather is changing it is getting cold, soon my green leaves will die one Oak tree cries. The Beech tree a leafy canopy tall, murmurs a lament to the autumn breeze; Fir, Pine and Poplar rustle, growl and call, yes, after the red and orange we freeze. I come upon a red Maple tree bare, I lost all my leaves first she tells me sad; they danced, twirled for a while without a care, but, the Willow tree told me she was glad. You see in the Spring new life will grow, grow; and there is beauty in Fall . . . and the snow !

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Date: 9/24/2024 5:39:00 AM
Dear Constance, your inspired poem is thought-provoking. I enjoyed the emotions and wisdom shared by the trees. Congratulations for your success in John’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/24/2024 12:01:00 PM
Susan, thank you for the compliment, comment, and congratultions, Constance
Date: 9/23/2024 3:44:00 PM
Yes, Constance, if trees could talk that is exactly what they would say. Love your imaginative angle on the contest. SuZ
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Date: 9/24/2024 12:01:00 PM
Suzanne, thank you so much for your comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 9/23/2024 1:10:00 PM
Constance, I recall a song verse "i talk to the trees but they don't listen to me". Well, it seems you do listen to them. Very nicely done take on the contest and thanks for participating.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:02:00 PM
Joh, thank you for the contest an my placement, and for the comment, appreciate, Constance
Date: 8/29/2024 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely Autumn write. Great/Pretty Picture... "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Constance La France
Date: 8/31/2024 5:32:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the comment, and compliment, appreciate, Constance

Book: Shattered Sighs