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A Lawless Sonnet

The rush of wind c h u r n s sported leaves of fall, charming the r u s t i c path so warm and cold. A u t u m n a l gal whispers in brief e n t h r a l. S e v e r i t y of chill is c r o u c h i n g bold. Pumpkins don’t scream when scooped of seeds and fruit. The hush of f l i t t i n g eyes, f l a m i n g with oils, f r i g h t e n the dark, the b l a c k e s t cats recruit, And bring to mind c h a r c o a l-c a l d r o n that boils. I worry n o t of l a t e s h a d o w s of a g e. Skulk-stares s h u d d e r when sight is lit with peace. I iron n o t my w r i n k l y smile, my s a g e. In Autumn’s a c e, serpent’s r e c o i l and c e a s e. Ruby, amber, and b i t t e r s w e e t, the s h a p e s. The gentlest c r u n c h and flung football e s c a p e s.

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Date: 8/30/2024 3:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lawless Sonnet, Kim: Very enthralled with the spread out words. They do create a sense of time speeding up and slowing down. Very innovative, my dear. A great contender. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2024 5:07:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed this one! Glad you liked the spread out words! :)
Date: 8/27/2024 2:14:00 PM
Dear Kim, your personality shines- <3 always a fan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 3:33:00 PM
:) Thanks
Date: 8/27/2024 7:27:00 AM
Dear Kim, You have put me in the mood for Autumn which is my favorite season. I love how you used the spacing to create even more affect in your verses. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel! It is my favorite also, followed by Winter though when I get cold now, I chill down to the bone and it takes a bit to warm up. Love the fashions of Fall and Winter and the fresh brisk air. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/26/2024 11:17:00 AM
This is impressive love the flow of fall energy and the rhyme!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 11:26:00 AM
Thanks so much! I appreciate!
Date: 8/26/2024 10:18:00 AM
A very fluid and thoughtful poem Kim one for Reflecting on as the solar dims..As fires flicka Like ( a dolphins aquaed tail, sheens) i'll think on your Lines 'my friend' in hoar frost to Roaring gales.)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 10:41:00 AM
Yay! Yay! Yay! Fall is a favorite season! Can’t wait to smell the brisk scent and that which reminds me of football, falling leaves, Halloween (don’t celebrate anymore but a great childhood memory), and yes, age LOL (we might as well laugh) Hugs, Joe!

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