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The Weight of Empty

That sanguine little girl so full of longing Gave up her ghost inside and left it homeless, wandering Sleepless I lay back and wonder why When you enter mind I want to cry I’ve forgotten what it feels like to be truly happy But I know I’d find it If I someday found you I wouldn’t trade this torture for all the peace in the world I wouldn’t erase your face from my mind for a universe I won’t shut out your beautiful voice to save my life I will stop at nothing to make you all mine The weight of empty Crushing load of inner vacancy I’ve forgotten what it felt like when my soul wasn’t heavy But I know that it once again could fly If I could take you with me I wouldn’t trade these tears for all the bliss on this barren earth There’s nothing more beautiful to me than you, when you smile I couldn’t forget you if that were my desire And only death will keep me from my place at your side sorrylittlesharky.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/26/2011 6:57:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you S.L. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mrs. Brown! I appreciate your feedback. I think your work is lovely, and thank you for taking the time to encourage me. Have a wonderful day, and I look forward to seeing more work from you!
Date: 7/25/2011 9:22:00 PM
Very poignant and touchy write, S,L,
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