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The Warring Curses

We stood atop God's hill among God's hills and saw no mountains where mountains are not seen, but gazed hatefully, fearfully, longingly into Satan's valley. Ours was the grandest little hill, and below was the wickedest valley, and between was the contest of angels dark and fair where the living is not easy and the dying is not quick. At once we knew both all that there was to be known and nothing that could be known. Once born, twice seduced, yet more, we dared to peer sideways and downward and morbidly at the edge of the plague. And weary, or indifferent, some were claimed, vanished into the core of the depraved, where the dying is not easy for the killing is not quick. The warring curses were one. 6th July 2018

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Date: 1/24/2019 8:11:00 AM
I njoyed rereading this one.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 1/24/2019 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, I'm pleased if it was good for another look.
Date: 1/10/2019 10:15:00 AM
I like this Lawrence.
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Date: 1/10/2019 11:44:00 AM
Thanks very much, Rob, very pleased that you enjoyed.
Date: 9/3/2018 6:02:00 AM
Your choice of phrases is very open for multiple interpretations and full of metaphor. Excellent contrasts between the waring factions. The language puts me in mind of something out of The Divine Comedy, Milton, or Blake.
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Date: 9/3/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Luke, if it brings to mind anything from the great old epics, I'm pleased to hear it.
Date: 9/2/2018 11:08:00 AM
I feel an awe-inspired beauty in the exquisite expression of your deeply meaningful poem, Lawrence. Your artistry touches my spirit and your imagery enlivens my imagination. I enjoyed the contrast in your poem and the nuances of your word play. Brilliant poetry! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 9/2/2018 1:54:00 PM
Very high praise indeed, Susan, thank you no end.
Date: 7/26/2018 9:07:00 AM
Exceptional poetry from a true and gifted poet! A fav, a shining gem...
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, far too kind, you are.
Date: 7/23/2018 1:59:00 PM
I really enjoyed your play with words here...
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thanks, I just about enjoyed it myself...;-)
Date: 7/18/2018 8:59:00 AM
Somehow this brought to mind the Devil bringing Jesus to the top of a mountain to view all the kingdoms of the world. I enjoyed this piece. A belated welcome to the soup.
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:40:00 AM
I hadn't actually thought about it, or intended it that way, but that is a very keen and welcome new perspective.
Date: 7/6/2018 10:58:00 PM
Lawerence.. enjoyed your write about the Warring Curses!
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/7/2018 1:32:00 AM
Thank you Lyric Man. Later in the day, when I can steal some time, I look forward to reading yours.

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