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The Visit Dimly lit room with flowered wallpaper, bridal chamber for a couple, 1920. In her noontime daydream she could see back then. Coal dust between her fingers, a strong back from lifting buckets, waiting for the annual Christmas visit. “My husband’s coming to town, on the 4 o’clock train.'' She told all her girlfriends in the Excelsior Club. Welcoming room with scented linens and stern religious figures New curtains with matching bedspreads Smelling strong of Estee Lauder. Grandmother Friend Mother-in-law Church woman Daughter Caregiver Woman in love with one wish This night of the year, with her husband, this Christmas Eve, and then he will be gone. Back to the woman he lived with. Time must stand still and be a welcome visitor tonight Time must go back and bring a 20’s memory to a 60’s room while somewhere smelling of camphor and wintergreen an invalid mother, rocks and prays sits and sighs. Tomorrow morning oyster fritters, grits and fried eggs all for him to be gone she would face her coal bins and her ointments a sick mother and another year her beautiful bridal chamber, ashes of roses wallpaper weeping as she picks up the phone to call a girlfriend. 12/22/17

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Date: 3/23/2018 2:07:00 PM
Sadness in a beautiful piece. Great work. Absolutely touched by it
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/27/2018 11:55:00 AM
I was a pleasure to see that you had stopped by.
Date: 3/22/2018 2:57:00 AM
That is so heartbreakingly sad. How did this poem come to you? How on earth can this happen in real life (I suppose)? Like Line, I would also like to know more of the story. A sequel? But maybe not, because the poem stands convincingly on its own. Many wishes, Kai
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/22/2018 10:30:00 PM
They were my grandparents. Thanks for you last comment. I am glad the poem stands on its own. However, it was an NA in the contest. What can you say. 1blessings, Janis aka Sian
Date: 3/21/2018 9:55:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, Sian. I would love to know more.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/22/2018 10:31:00 PM
Thanks Line. This is all, as I told Kai, they were my grandparents.

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