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The Stillness Fractures

. In the stillness of the night the black night the night where stars flicker with bright radiance when the only is ourn hot breathes clearly visible in the cold crispy night The stillness fractures with these words "my love for you will never splinter like the winter at Springs wake"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/21/2010 12:30:00 AM
James you fractured the STILLNESS with so much beauty...What a lovely verse,,,'MY LOVE FOR YOU WILL NEVER SPLINTER'.Isn't that romantic?Beautiful..the black night is shining again,im sure..Charma
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Date: 2/20/2010 10:52:00 AM
Amazing image of the stars and breath mingling in the cold night air, James! Was wondering if you were still with us; so glad to see you post again. Hope you have entered this in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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