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The Secret Somewhere someplace not far away a couple lied together. No talk about the future no talk about forever. They had lovers of their own their lovers were not there. It's best if kept a secret the love that they would share. Lost in loves great passion covered in each others sweat. They're going to have a baby but they don't know it yet. In nine months the baby born a secret softly cries. So much still for him to learn of life conceived in lies. Often he just played alone it seemed it was his way. Then one day the secret was sent outside to play. He grew strong like others did he gave it all his best. Without one clue he never knew the truth beat in his chest. Overwhelmed again and again the sadness he can't shake. The devil whispered in his ear “You are a mistake”. Still he tried through tears he cried to somehow rise above. Getting lost time and again in his search for love. When the walls came crashing down his whole world fell apart. Welcome to the world of secrets and to your broken heart. Shattered like a piece of glass his dreams fell to the ground. Somewhere up near heaven even angels heard the sound. Tears poured from his heart and soul through both day and night. Searching for some healing in words that he would write. Broken in so many ways all he meant for good. Forever somehow secret where some misunderstood. Now he walks in shadows seeking shelter from the rain. Don't you dare look in his eyes you'll get lost inside his pain. Like the secret long ago he spends his time alone. It seems being by himself is now his comfort zone. Asking nothing from no one wanting only just to give. The only dream he still dreams is live and just let live. A million miles on his heart and tears that he still cries. So it is for secrets and those conceived in lies. Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/6/2020 7:22:00 AM
We even have a President who lies to our surprise and wish he was wise.
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Date: 1/18/2018 12:12:00 PM
Parents think they are protecting when in fact they do worse harm. So sorry you went through this. On the bright side you are quite the poet.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 1/18/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thank you Richard for your encouraging words. I can’t thank you enough.
Date: 7/9/2015 9:29:00 AM
I know I've read this sometime before but Don't know how I couldn't have commented. So I won't let it pass now. It's good that I know most of this already or I would have teared up and clogged my throat all over again. An awesome write, it is made more so by your honesty and openness. Be happy, Ed. God bless you. hugs! Kim :-)
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 7/9/2015 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Hugs to you. <3
Date: 4/12/2015 7:21:00 PM
So pleasant to stop and read a bit of poetry this evening, so touching often our parents have no clue how they affect us- thank you. Light & Love
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Date: 4/1/2015 9:35:00 AM
Edwin, this poem is sad and lonely and full of sincerity and healing. Just keep on writing and speaking your truth. It's therapeutically good. Blessings.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/3/2015 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Iris :) Sorry for the delayed response. I've been traveling to New England. And was without internet access for a time. God bless.
Date: 3/30/2015 10:19:00 AM
Edwin, I really enjoy reading your poem. Very well written and truly another way expressing your heartfelt thoughts on "Secrets"
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:48:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your story with us. True experiences of pain and heartache are the hardest to express I think. I'd like to share with you a piece of wisdom. Secrets only remain so when left in the dark. Once brought to light, secrets become lessons to learn and heal from. Shame is no longer in play and strength is found. Keep your head up. You need only stay lonely if you choose to.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/29/2015 11:17:00 PM
Thank you Angela. I couldn't agree more. And that is why I'm sharing and bringing it to light. I'm not strong enough to bear it any longer. :) Thank you for the read and the kind words. God Bless. Ed.
Date: 3/28/2015 9:51:00 AM
Very good poem. Good show of emotion.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/29/2015 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Patrycjusz for taking the time to read it and to say hi. :) Blessings to you. Ed
Date: 3/27/2015 4:01:00 PM
Excellent poem ! Keep on writing .. :)
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Date: 3/27/2015 8:05:00 AM
Hi Edwin: A very well written intense poem about secrets and pain. My compliments!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/29/2015 11:20:00 PM
Thank you Ralph. I'm honored and grateful for you. :)
Date: 3/27/2015 7:34:00 AM
amazing piece, honesty is the best policy, or have something follow you for the rest of your life,
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:03:00 PM
I think this poem of a story is a master piece. I read it all the way through and found intimate and sad. Your a good writer and poet. VB Rogers
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:38:00 AM
Val. Thank you so much! I'm overwhelmed. So much I wish to say about the secret but not enough room. Any advice? Ed
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:06:00 PM
PS -- Welcome to PoetrySoup HAPPY to have you. V.B Rogers
Date: 3/26/2015 8:58:00 PM
Good writing--I like the understanding of this child's life and the feeling for the child's needs. And the ending seems just right.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:39:00 AM
Thank you Albert. The child while hard to understand to many was easy for me. I was that child :) God bless my friend. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 4:23:00 PM
Difficult subject matter. Would have liked to read more anger from the child grown to an adult. Some of the rhymes seem forced, but there is much creative effort here. Good read. Keep posting.
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Date: 3/27/2015 3:39:00 PM
Wasn't aware that the person in your poem was you, it being in third person. Anger isn't always directed at people. Knew a person who went through this. The person wasn't angry unless subject came up. Then it was expressed by mood rather than direct confrontation. It would help to understand what people go through in such situations.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:44:00 AM
Dear Graphite. Any anger I felt was pointed inward. As if I deserved it somehow, We all deal with things differently. My way has never been to take it out on others. God bless. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 3:51:00 PM
Hi there Edwin, wow this really got to me, such an amazing write, Sarah.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:46:00 AM
Sarah. All I can say is thank you though I do long to say more about the secret. It will be forever the story of my life. With love. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 3:51:00 PM
Good treatment of the subject matter. Sad, some innocent folks pay for others' indulgences. I feel that all the lines appear bulleted. Maybe some enjambment would have softened the entire piece.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:42:00 AM
To soften it any to me would have been to hide my own emotion connected to the story. And my whole intention was to be open and honest about the pain. If it seemed raw. Believe me, It is. God bless. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 3:49:00 PM
Hi Edwin, enjoyed your piece very much. Conveys a dark yet powerful message, of lost belonging. Power to your pen my friend! *7*.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:48:00 AM
William. Thank you. I think it has become my mission to tell the world about the impact of honesty or dishonesty. We never know the depths of that impact without being there. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 1:56:00 PM
I became distracted in your 1st line:'Somewhere someplace not far away a couple lied together': 'laid together'?? is that what you mean; I don't think you meant they shared a lie. It put me off from the rest of this heartfelt poem. KALan
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Date: 3/28/2015 7:07:00 PM
Edwin: glad you took my comment in stride. Language and purpose is so important; I didn't allow the rest of your poem the sink in after that 1st line before I commented. best to you, KAlan
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:51:00 AM
They Lied together was 100% intentional. The entire poem was about them lying together. The secret was me. Until in my forties and beyond my life was a lie. Too little room here to explain. But thanks anyway :) Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 1:33:00 PM
Oh Man! This really moved me to tears. It's a great write Edwin, gets a 7 from me. Please read my poem, 'The Whisper' God Bless. D.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:35:00 AM
With all that being said I wanted you to know that your comments about kindred spirits and being a fan are what made it so clear to me that you would be the first person I responded to. If only to say thank you again and again. I'm looking forward to reading The Whisper. God Bless you Dave. Your friend Ed Hofert
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:34:00 AM
Dear Dave. Thank you my friend for your kind words and your vote of confidence : It comes at a point in my life I need it most. I'm overwhelmed that Poetrysoup selected me and my poems to feature and overwhelmed by the response. I'm so happy they selected the secret.
Date: 3/26/2015 12:53:00 PM
As goes a secret, goes a life down a different path. Thanks very much for this and for an opportunity to relate and reflect.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:52:00 AM
Thank you Robert. God Bless. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 11:55:00 AM
I received this poem this morning . . . very moving. I identify well with secrets and how they keep us in knots entirely. Great work . . . Be blessed.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:54:00 AM
Carolyn. Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words. And for identifying with me. God Bless. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 11:52:00 AM
From the moment I read your poem, I feel the pain. This is a sad sad story. And it was more painful after finding out that this is your story. :( I'm sorry for the pain. But surely, you are an inspiration. Keep inspiring.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/27/2015 2:56:00 AM
Leng. Your response freed tears I thought I was done with. To know you felt the pain is to know you shared it and made me feel less alone. Isn't that what poetry is all about? :) Thank you my friend. And God Bless. Ed
Date: 3/26/2015 11:45:00 AM
What a great piece?! I was totally carried away. 2thumbs up. Bravo. I'm looking forward to read more of your piece. :) Lovely day.:)
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 3/29/2015 11:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Leng. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/2/2015 8:32:00 AM
Wow intense story, you had me hanging on every word!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 2/2/2015 9:52:00 AM
That's a good thing. Right? :) Thank you Casarah. Ed
Date: 2/1/2015 10:23:00 PM
Very nice pen Edwin! powerful piece my dear friend ! A 7 from me! God bless you! Have a very lovely day! :) Love n' hugs! xxxx D.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 2/1/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Dorian. Love and hugs to you.
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